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Alexander Lovell, PhD's avatar

Jeannie, this poem truly resonated with me. It's like you captured that feeling of wanting to truly understand someone or something, but knowing there's always a core part that remains a mystery. We can walk around, observe, appreciate the beauty, but full comprehension remains elusive... it's both beautiful and a little bittersweet.

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Rafael Concepcion's avatar

My favorite thing about this poem is the line divisions. Breaking up the verse the way you did adds something new that would not otherwise happen if this was written in prose. Very nice!

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